Fortune and Favor

The Barlow family name used to announce itself. The name alone secured the family a house granted by inheritance, the finest assortments of jewels and silver, and endless invitations written in careful script. Seasons passed by dinners filled with soft laughter and dances covered in gloved hands. But all those comforts vanished when Mr. Barlow made a single wrong investment and placed his trust in a notorious rake. Soon, both their fortune and favor vanished, and the Barlow name fell into ruin.

Yet, in their darkest hour, Mr. Barlow received a letter from an old friend–Mr. Harold. The letter spoke in length of loyalty and gratitude, recalling past kindnesses with sincerest care. He stated that he had heard of the family’s misfortune and believed he might be of assistance. He noted that his house was very large and often in need of order. If one of Mr. Barlow’s daughters were sent to reside with him and manage his household, he would see the debt resolved and the family’s reputation restored. 

Mr. Barlow read the letter aloud to his daughters that evening. Helena, the eldest, spoke first. She remembered Mr. Harold as handsome and composed, and admitted that she had once admired him from afar. Coredila followed, saying she would gladly live in such a grand house, surrounded by comfort and luxury. Margaret, the youngest, said that she would do whatever was asked of her, anything to help preserve the family’s honor.  .

To avoid further scandal, Mr. Barlow chose Margaret. Trusting her to not be distracted by romance or ambition. She departed the next morning.

Mr. Harold’s stately house stood at the end of a long drive, built of pale stone and lined with tall, dark tinted glass windows. Mr. Harold greeted Margaret with kindness and spoke of expectations plainly. The work was not difficult. She was to oversee the household and join him for dinner each evening. In return, she would be given her own lodgings and an allowance sufficient to meet her needs and those of her family.

“There is one rule,” he said, the pleasantries fading from his voice. “You must never go to the cellar of the house.”

Mr. Harold caught the surprise in Margaret’s face, and softened his tone at once. “There is nothing of importance there,” he said. “I would rather you not trouble yourself with it.”

Grateful for her position and unwilling to jeopardize his generosity, Margaret agreed.

And so, years passed peacefully. Margaret learned the rhythms of the house and its owner. She knew when Mr. Harold preferred silence and when he wished for conversation. He treated her with consideration and spoke to her as a partner rather than a servant. Over time, her place at the dinner table shifted. They no longer sat at opposite ends, but side by side. Evening walks became customary. One gesture led to another, and eventually they shared a bed each night.

One evening, while Mr. Harold was away on business, Margaret found herself alone in the house. The silence pressed on her more heavily than usual. She wandered without purpose and came at last to the cellar entrance. It looked as it always had, closed and unremarkable.

It was then she remembered his words from her first morning at the house: There is nothing of importance there.

But so much time had passed, and she was practically his family now. What was his was always hers, too. So she opened the door.

The cellar was far smaller than the house above it suggested. It was simply a low stone chamber cut into the earth like a cave. The air was cold but strangely clean, free of dust or damp, as though the room was often tended to with care. Along the walls, objects lay covered and arranged with deliberate order, each item was concealed beneath cloth or linen. Nothing appeared abandoned. In one corner, Margaret noticed a second door set into the stone. It was narrow and low, made of heavy material, and had a giant lock insert on its right.

Margaret moved slowly, uncertain now of what she had expected to find. At the far end of the room stood a table holding a diary. Beside it rose a large rectangular shape, concealed beneath cloth.

She approached and drew the cloth back. It was a portrait showing a woman seated near a dim window, her hands folded over her stomach. She smiled faintly, though pain seemed to rest beneath the surface of her expression. Margaret stepped closer and saw the shape beneath the woman’s dress. She was with child. Margaret could not help but notice the resemblance in the woman’s dark hair, dark eyes, and softly oval face– all features uncomfortably close to her own.

Margaret opened the diary next to the portrait and found letters pressed between its pages. The earliest spoke of affection and secrecy. Then the letters began to ask for more: a home, stability, and title. The letters grew desperate and sharp, pleading for safety and recognition, then threatening exposure if none were given. Then the letters stopped abruptly. 

Margaret searched frantically for an answer, some conclusion that would make sense of the silence.

“I told you never to come here.”

She turned at the sound of his cold voice. Mr. Harold stood in the doorway. His expression  blank. 

Margaret understood then what the letters meant of the man she had come to love. She realized his charm and beauty were masks to cover horrors he wanted hidden deep below.

She said nothing. Neither did he.

The next morning, Margaret was gone.

A year passed and Mr. Barlow came to the house to inquire after his youngest daughter. Mr. Harold received him with courtesy and regret. He explained that Margaret had been unwell and was resting. 

“It would be best,” he said gently, “Not to disturb her. You know how such conditions are. They require isolation.”

Mr. Barlow accepted this without protest, grateful for the continued kindness.

The house remained ready. The cellar door was secured once more, and above it, the rooms were cleared to receive the next guest.